Video Issues

Looking at the video i have several issues concerning the quality of the performance and how it was filmed; firstly the zooming on the camera is jolty and inconsistent, instead we should have physically moved the camera nearer, also there are buildings in the background which pulls away from the feeling of the video, and the performance feels dull and unimaginative, the costume is boring and bland, we faced a lot of problems filming outside especially with the weather, the weather was either too cold or too wet to film, so when we were able to shoot we rushed and its apparent in our video.